tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post8907701196947708843..comments2024-03-28T00:20:41.640-07:00Comments on Missed Periods and Other Grammar Scares: Dress to ImpressMissed Periodshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10343265071637032284noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-19979355668643335632011-03-20T08:30:47.802-07:002011-03-20T08:30:47.802-07:00First of all, my students NEVER curse me ;)
Secon...First of all, my students NEVER curse me ;)<br /><br />Secondly, thank you for such an excellent post. Because I suck at intros, my instructions are usually generic and boring.<br /><br />Thirdly, you rocked the intro about how to write an intro. Really? You are a goddess.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-67549062175916022682011-03-20T08:26:42.050-07:002011-03-20T08:26:42.050-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-67606194294524330332011-03-15T15:57:31.732-07:002011-03-15T15:57:31.732-07:00I'm hooked. I wonder if that woman contracted...I'm hooked. I wonder if that woman contracted any STDs?Mary Aalgaardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051735579638637382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-43357374488614480272011-03-15T02:17:23.640-07:002011-03-15T02:17:23.640-07:00It must be interesting to be sitting in your class...It must be interesting to be sitting in your classes. You make grammar sound like Science. <br />Btw, I like the story about the transparent dress :)JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09615777330854552040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-67368138002148670742011-03-14T16:37:56.949-07:002011-03-14T16:37:56.949-07:00What delightful imagery throughout. Well done, as ...What delightful imagery throughout. Well done, as always.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17087847312958608930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-20363315017438113032011-03-14T14:41:32.060-07:002011-03-14T14:41:32.060-07:00I definitely need to work on this...thanks for the...I definitely need to work on this...thanks for the tip!! :) <br /><br />As always, great post and lesson!HulaBunshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09379487888764096689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-64774810435488069782011-03-12T22:24:15.722-08:002011-03-12T22:24:15.722-08:00I didn't know you'd married an Aussie. Exc...I didn't know you'd married an Aussie. Excellent taste there, I must say. I like mine very much!<br /><br />To Ms. Vance's class, I'd also say this: make sure your fun, attention-grabbing first line (and I absolutely agree that your essay will be more interesting if you use one) does relate to what you then go on to write. When you're done, check back to make sure your essay didn't turn into something different along the way.Amie Kaufmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15116472165351759477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-1666816855106507412011-03-12T12:04:20.329-08:002011-03-12T12:04:20.329-08:00Facebook is amazing for marketing, and lol at the ...Facebook is amazing for marketing, and lol at the sex girl.Junghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13204302112458105414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-90147993980694982702011-03-12T06:01:11.706-08:002011-03-12T06:01:11.706-08:00This entire post is win!!! You always crack me up!...This entire post is win!!! You always crack me up! :)Shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05940369749048830429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-17720095005256518612011-03-12T02:58:45.184-08:002011-03-12T02:58:45.184-08:00Your Facebook example really shines here. And I th...Your Facebook example really shines here. And I think what you said doesn't just apply to essays, but to writing blog posts and fiction as well. Excellent advice!Jeff Beeslerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935580053176710609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-41893367891541670282011-03-11T19:54:28.201-08:002011-03-11T19:54:28.201-08:00Umm... restate the question?
See through underwea...Umm... restate the question?<br /><br />See through underwear, I need sex FB pages, and stalking an ex.<br /><br />I'm rethinking my old way of making a thesis statement.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-75481015966301859812011-03-11T17:10:07.229-08:002011-03-11T17:10:07.229-08:00Oddly enough, I just finished writing an essay! An...Oddly enough, I just finished writing an essay! And yes, I started with a thesis statement. :DBethany Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12829932931010851406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5330190226764495766.post-40913226357568080362011-03-11T16:50:17.841-08:002011-03-11T16:50:17.841-08:00ROTFL at your how-I-met-my-husband story! Hilariou...ROTFL at your how-I-met-my-husband story! Hilarious!<br /><br />And great tips. Wow, you are good at writing first sentences. :)Janet Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12688012956157161889noreply@blogger.com